tech writing
TechDescriptionRubric.docx3307_3_td_s16.docx
Amer
I’m not going to fill out the rubric just yet (but be sure to look it over if you haven’t yet). This paper seems like a first draft of some ideas you have for a description of microwaves. You need to organize this material into a description that follows the rubric criteria. Create an introduction, organize this material into visual and recognizable sections, label them, use writing techniques that make the writing stand out, avoid first person, and continue creating a finalized/organized draft that weaves all of these elements together. )
teachers comment on PDF
(I like the visual exploration that you are doing in this document. You are working on creating columns, graphics, captions, groupings, shadings, blocking, and other design elements. This is a great start. Not all of it is working quite yet. One concern is you don’t quite have enough material yet to make your description complete, so it feels a bit short. Because of this, it doesn’t go the full length needed for a description. The graphics are good and placed well, but could use more spacing around them and better clarification of their purpose and relation to the text. )