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instruction is: HAVARD format, this is UK homework,
Be sure to use the models and diagrams that are required in the request. 
and my first draft is: (plz follow this to edit this each of part)
 Some of the employments of the first law were cited and not marked. 1 The technical management section has no plans for the next five years and initiatives for the future. 2 The technical management part writes less of a hard and soft system changes, and each part does not use the model feel is simply a concept. In the 3marking section, there are no comments on the factors that make the two companies successful, and there is no critical evaluation of marketing strategies. 4 Without using Marketing Mix, Branding and Promotion, Market segmentation, Ansoff matrix, Product lifecycle, Market positioning, I saw that a market segmentation has not been written. on It is for these to write specific things not directly using this concept.